“A journey of a thousand
miles must begin with a single step.”
That quote just simply means that
everything must start with a simple but meaningful start. Everything should
start with something, right? Right. In our case, before we get all excited and
stuff we should first introduce the team that are part of this blog and this
journey. And by the way, we hope that you, readers, will be with us until the
end of our journey.
Vibeen a.k.a. the most recent “Kai Lin”
nickname is known as being the artistic and friendly girl in our class. Being
artistic and creative, Kai Lin is always asked to draw or decorate something
from the simple bond paper up to the most random things. She is also known as
the “one-who-has-a-good-singing-voice-and-recently-knows-how-to-play-the-guitar”
kind of person. She is also, by the way, adventurous and is game for anything. She’s
the type of person you’ll see inside the four corners of a room, with a few but close friends. All
in all, despite her dynamic character, one can describe her in just these few
words, talented and kind.
Chyna/Chi Chi or “Snow Drop” is one that
you can see occasionally bumping, spilling, dropping and hitting things
accidentally (yeah, we know, she’s really clumsy). Once you hear the sound of an object that
dropped in the 2nd Floor of our school, most likely than not, it
will be her. Also known as the intellectual person/alien, she is mostly seen in
competitions held in her school. However, she’s more than that; she’s a true
friend which many people, including boys, trust. And she can be hiding many
things and talents that you didn’t expect from her, but watch out, before you
even say “Hi” to her; she might bump you or accidentally hit you first.
Josiah is the athletic and TALL guy that
you can here making jokes and laughing really LOUD. He would be the one who
would always express his opinions to the teacher and to his classmates. He has
a circle of friends, but only has a few CLOSE friends. One would always see him
shooting hoops in the basketball area and if not, playing any other sport. He’s
also very musical and knows how to play the piano and guitar very well, many
people think that he is talented and yeah, he really is. You might think that
he’s mean and annoying sometimes, but once you get to know him, he would be a
great, sincere and caring friend to be with.
When you here the sound of the recorder playing random
songs, it will almost always be Nathan. You would always here him say random
facts and riddles about everything. He’s the one you’d see in the corner
writing in his journal or drawing characters when we have free time, but when
classes start, he’d be the person who can express his opinions without
hesitation. He might be somehow a “loner”, but when you fully understand his
TRUE self, he’s not just any friend, but he’s this FRIEND that you can count on
and can understand you because he might be having the same problems that you have.
Aluxre (Raj) is the guy you’d see with
friends who laugh at him and you’d see him laughing back too, but inside he’s
thinking differently. He’s the kind of person who’s different from what people
think about him. When people think he’s not nice, they’re WRONG. When people
think he’s so sensitive, they’re also WRONG. He’s more than just that, they
just need to think more deeply and think of the other possible things that he
can be. Also known as one of the smartest boys, Aluxre’s known to work hard and
when he says something, sometimes he means the other. So you see, he’s very
unpredictable, but he’s the one to watch.
SO here it is, the 5 members namely Kai
Lin, Snow Drop, Josiah, Nathan and Aluxre. The 5 of us will be part of this
journey that will uncover the truth about EARTH and other less-known facts.
We
made this blog to make the readers (Yeah, YOU) think outside of the box and to
know the “major, major” issues that’s happening in the WORLD we live in. We
also want to tell everyone what we think, not just to the 4 corners of the
classroom, and we are very thankful that T. Rye gave us the opportunity to
express our opinions and to make this blog our project.
MAY GOD BLESS ALL OF US
AND MAY THE JOURNEY START!
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Interesting descriptions you have here! Very engaging and I did not have any problem with the blog's technical details. Just try to learn how to hyperlink so the URL's of your image sources wont be exposed nakedly. However, I hope you will copyread your post first before you publish it. I spotted several grammatical and writing errors (e.g. "Once you hear an object…", "When you hear a recorder..." etc.). Please do improve on this aspect.
P.S.
Who is TheLastOne? Is he/she another member of the group?